PL first term report

I have achieved a B grade in the most recent essay. I have improved my essay writing and understood both films. To improve to my target grade of an A I need to be learning multiple contextual points to refer to instead of just one. I need to be less repetitive in essay's and improve my A02 for which I only got 5/10. This is weaker than the 8/10 I achieved in A01. When writing essays I tend to feel that I do not have enough to speak about. Despite being able to point out the key elements I need to improve in finding the meaning behind the micro elements used in the films. To improve this I should widen my contextual knowledge and my knowledge of the directors films and views. Hopefully this will stop me from feeling like Vincent when writing essays.